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Graffiti Days by ~Illness-Illusion:iconIllness-Illusion:

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©2007-2009 ~Illness-Illusion
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Submitted: August 23, 2007
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This is the unrevised version of a painting for a friend on SheezyArt and DA: :iconbubbaman2491: It's his OC Hitsu.

I need to go back and make some major changes...because like all of my challenging pieces. It's full of mistakes, errors, and major 'f*** ups'

I've have received excellent help from friends on Sheezy. Two great artists in particular have given me some great steps to fix it. So when time permits I'll hopefully put up a better version soon. Major problems lie with the shadows, the feet, and overall depth in the work.

I'm open to critiques that don't pertain to the mistakes already stated. I know they are wrong, and am working to fix those, but if anything else catches your eye I'd love to make this work better.

Although, I love to hear critiques, please don't leave useless critiques like 'this looks weird' or 'what's wrong with _______??" As this only irritates me and makes me wonder if the person even bothers to read the description. Such comments will be ignored.

Hope everyone enjoys it nonetheless! :D

**EDIT: I cropped his legs off...XD They were really bothering me....he is back under construction. @w@
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=Serrifth:iconSerrifth: Aug 23, 2007, 4:07:56 PM
he looks a tad bit short and where the fold of the waist is kinda uneven. i dunno, but the color and the face is killer! i'm not good with critiques and you know it! its hard to look at your stuff and point out anything wrong. its damn near impossible! :D heh heh, but your stuff still kicks my drawings ass. ;p

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I am Rorschach in the =Gunga-Diner :rose:
Who happens to be a street walkin' cheetah with a heart full of Napalm.
~Bubbaman2491:iconBubbaman2491: Aug 23, 2007, 4:09:07 PM
yay you posted it here too ;D still love it, thanks again for drawing him!

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What's that?......you ran over an entire third grade class!......THAT'S FANTASTIC!
~Illness-Illusion:iconIllness-Illusion: Aug 23, 2007, 4:16:24 PM
XD i'll never use yoshiki as a body reference again...because the man IS too short [link]

I will keep that in mind next time...through revision...i don't know if i would be able to stretch out his legs without further skewing the depth in the background...=_=;;

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I have been told that I am a surrealist. Which simply isn't true. I never paint dreams or nightmares. I paint my own reality.

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~Illness-Illusion:iconIllness-Illusion: Aug 23, 2007, 4:16:34 PM
No problem :)

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I have been told that I am a surrealist. Which simply isn't true. I never paint dreams or nightmares. I paint my own reality.

~Frida Kahlo
=Serrifth:iconSerrifth: Aug 23, 2007, 4:21:40 PM
man, he is short! O_o"
i wonder, do you paint on separate layers? i only say this because i have no good ideas, but perhaps you can stretch it out... wait. you're using painter right?

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I am Rorschach in the =Gunga-Diner :rose:
Who happens to be a street walkin' cheetah with a heart full of Napalm.
~Illness-Illusion:iconIllness-Illusion: Aug 23, 2007, 4:29:41 PM
actually for this painting...i do use separate layers, and i use Photoshop..but the pants were merged with the entire outfit...in order to reclaim some memory. if i tried to stretch out the legs...i'd have to cut them and drag them down a little...and then paint the gap.....however..the feet would probably be dragged off the canvas...so i'd have to make my canvas longer...and then fix the background on top of that....i think for myself i can live with him being short..XD most asian guys are anyway.

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I have been told that I am a surrealist. Which simply isn't true. I never paint dreams or nightmares. I paint my own reality.

~Frida Kahlo
=Serrifth:iconSerrifth: Aug 23, 2007, 4:35:27 PM
true true, XD just don't paint an avarage american person next to him, the head would probably go off the canvas. :rofl: i guess i can live with it if you can.

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I am Rorschach in the =Gunga-Diner :rose:
Who happens to be a street walkin' cheetah with a heart full of Napalm.
~InstantOatmeal13:iconInstantOatmeal13: Aug 23, 2007, 4:47:58 PM
I'm totally in love with the way you color...*marries you*
Bwahaha!

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"There are some people who will tell you that haphazardly adding zombies to any game does not necessarily improve it. Those people are idiots." -Game Informer (Dec. 2007)
=xSYNNcere:iconxSYNNcere: Aug 23, 2007, 5:15:16 PM
*u* too prettyy

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~Skytiger92:iconSkytiger92: Aug 23, 2007, 5:15:53 PM
-squints- Is this really a new pic by Illusion? I thought the day would never come! =D It looks spectacular, love. I love the graffiti in the back and then the butterflies and such. And the guy looks so cool!
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